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Old April 29th, 2008, 10:26 pm
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Feedback - Anya

This is the feedback thread for my new story Anya. So what do you all think of it?


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Old June 3rd, 2009, 1:20 am
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I liked it
But as a writer and reader I can see that you were missing some elements and details and it was mostly dialogue.
I don't think I am right, but it looks like you wrote because you had nothing more to do. I don't really think that was the reason.
Perhaps you had to think in more fluid ideas, before writing.

Apart from it, I like it.


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Old June 3rd, 2009, 10:24 pm
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I'm glad you did. I actually wrote this when I was... 10, maybe 11, for school. Don't remember what grade I got, but I know it wasn't an A.


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