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Old March 30th, 2011, 9:34 am
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Alone

Alone


Alone, though I sometimes feel-
Awakened by thoughts seemingly so unreal.

Amidst the nights of endless dreams,
though time seems to be slipping,
bursting at once hefty seams.

Cornered, helplessly wavering in the balance,
I assume nothing is for certain, and
undergo pressures, struggles
all with the utmost of challenge.

Alone, though I sometimes feel-
I merely am the hamster
in all of life's insane wheel.

-Brynn Ashleigh (dobbydear15)



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Old March 30th, 2011, 6:00 pm
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I appreciate both the struggle and the surrender in this piece. Well done, please post more!


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Old March 30th, 2011, 6:44 pm
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Thank you! I was slightly bored and just started writing. Thats how they all happen! I will be sure to post more!


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