Now fixed (talking about double dialogue.)
I'm not really going to cut it until the first draft is finished, and I posted everything I've done.
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I decided to do some cuts. I cant be bothered centering, sorry. Edit: Word to the wise: do your centering before you post and not in edit mode.
NB: This is now deleted as I felt we didn't need this twice. What was cut is now red on the Post 1 version
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OK, here is some extra scenes I just did.
My old script Part II: 
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