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Old February 11th, 2011, 7:16 pm
KevinWeasley  Undisclosed.gif KevinWeasley is offline
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Re: Fan Scripts: Script your own version of Harry Potter

Hi, I'm writing my script of PoA and here's a bit. (Sorry, I'm from Germany, so my English sucks ) I'd love to hear your opinion

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FADE IN:

DARKNESS.

BOOM - again - BOOM (later known as a clock.)

We GLIDE THROUGH the blackness which is transforming into a midnight sky. We PASS THROUGH the WB LOGO. Into more mist...

DISSOLVE TO:

1 EXT. AZKABAN PRISON - NORTHSEA - MIDNIGHT 1

We PUSH CLOSER to the A-form building on a lonely island. Dark creatures - DEMENTORS - fly around the prison.

”HARRY POTTER AND THE PRISONER OF AZKABAN”

We PASS THROUGH - then we quickly PUSH INTO one tiny window.

2 INT. AZKABAN PASSAGE - SAME 2

We PASS some cells. We see many DEATHEATERS (later known as BELLATRIX LESTRANGE, BARTY CROUCH JR. etc...). The cells are guarded by Dementors. As we hear a THUNDER we quickly PUSH to the only EMPTY CELL. The Dementors flying crazy around. A SUDDEN MOVE and we...

CUT TO:

3 INT. MINISTRY OF MAGIC - ATRIUM - HOURS LATER 3

The Minister of Magic CORNERLIUS FUDGE standing in front of a crowd of REPORTERS.

FUDGE
It has been confirmed that the dangerous mass murderer Sirius Black escaped from Azkaban prison. Everyone have to be prepared for the worst. The premier minister from the muggles was informed that Black is a dangerous killer with a ”gun”.

FLASH TO:

4 INT. PREMIER MINISTER OFFICE - LONDON - ONE HOUR AGO 4

A big room with a WIDE WINDOW with a look at London. The PREMIER MINISTER sits at his table. Fudge stands near the fireplace which flames are GREEN.

FUDGE
Black is dangerous. With only one spell he killed one wizard and injured over twenty muggles.

The Premier Minister looks worried out of the window.

FLASH TO:




5 INT. MINISTRY OF MAGIC - ATRIUM - CONTINUED 5

Off Fudge’s worried face.

FUDGE
But your Ministry will try everything to catch Black and make sure our population is safe.


DISSOLVE INTO:

The DAILY PROPHET.

The picture with Fudge POP OUT and goes on to headlines like:

”NEW PROTECTION MEASURES AT HOGWARTS.”
”MAGICAL POPULATION LIVES IN FEAR.”
”AZKABAN - SAFE?”

Then we pop to a main article about Black which contains BIG LETTERS (”DANGEROUS, KILLED WIZARD, INJURED MUGGLES, FOLLOWER TO YOU-KNOW-WHO”).

CLOSE ON THE PHOTO.
Black’s face is filled with anger. Special mark on his scary, crazy EYES.

We PUSH BACK.

6 INT. DURSLEY’S KITCHEN - PRIVET DRIVE 4 - DAY 6

CLOSE ON THE TELEVISION SCREEN.
The same photo of Black as in the Prophet.

REPORTER (V.O.)
Black is a dangerous criminal. We’d set up a special number which you can call at every time if you have any information about Black. ..

VERNON (O.S.)
Look at this!

VERNON DURSLEY sits at the table, eating bacon. Next to him sits his son DUDLEY. AUNT PETUNIA stands at the oven.

VERNON
That he’s a criminal you must not tell us. And this hair.

Like it was agreed - HARRY POTTER enters the kitchen. Vernon raises an eyebrow, looks to Petunia.

PETUNIA
Did you told him?

VERNON
Not yet.

HARRY
What told me?
Vernon’s looking annoying to Harry. His eyebrow’s still raised.

VERNON
That Magda is visiting.

Vernon smiles satisfied as he sees Harry’s expression. It’s petrified.

HARRY
No. No. You’re kidding.
(Looks to Vernon)
Okay. You’re not.

VERNON
Today.
(Ignores Harry’s expression)
First, you think before you speak to her.

HARRY
Fine, if she does.

Second, Magda do not know about your abnormality. So nothing will happen. You behave!

HARRY
Fine, if she does.


VERNON
(Satisfied)
And third, we told her you are visiting the St. Brutus Secure Centre for Incurably Criminal Boys!

HARRY
What!?

VERNON
And you will stay at this story!
(Looks to Petunia)
I get her from the airport.
(Looks to Harry)
Now.

7 INT. DURSLEY’S HALLWAY - MINUTES LATER 7

Vernon just want to open the door to leave as...

HARRY (O.S.)
Uncle Vernon?

VERNON
Yes?

Harry has a paper in his hand, gives it to Vernon.

HARRY
Can you sign this? Please?
VERNON
What’s that?

HARRY
Third graders at Hogw... At my school are allowed to visit the Hogsmeade, the village outs...

VERNON
Yeah, yeah. Later, perhaps.

8 INT. HARRY’S BEDROOM - LATER 8

Harry’s entering his room. Hedwig stands at the window with a dead mouse in her mouth.

HARRY
Hey Hedwig.
(Notice the mouse)
Nice.

He sits down on his bed, looking to the picture with his parents. Then he takes the Daily Prophet with Black at the front page. He’s still staring at the page when...

PETUNIA
Harry! Come on!

Harry sighs, leaving the room. But we stay on the Prophet.

”Black visited Hogwarts.”

9 INT. DURSLEY’S HALLWAY - SAME 9

Harry and Petunia waiting at the door.

PETUNIA
Do something with your hair!

HARRY
Try.

As Petunia wants to do something at Harry’s hair, the car outside parks and we hear big, loud footsteps on the ground.

PETUNIA
Now!

Harry opens the door and Vernon and a fat, mid 50’s old woman too. That’s AUNT MAGDA with her bulldog Ripper.

MAGDA
Oh, Petunia. So good to see you.

They’re hugging. Vernon takes off his jacket.


VERNON
You! Take the trunk. And...
HARRY
Yeah, yeah. If she does.

Harry takes it and brings it upstairs.

10 INT. DURSLEY’S LIVING ROOM - EVENING 10

Harry, Vernon, Petunia, Magda and Dudley sitting at the big table and eating.

MAGDA
Oh, you did a great job, Petunia.

PETUNIA
Thank you. Ehm, does Ripper want something?

Ripper scratches at the tablecloth.

MAGDA
Oh, he is just hungry.

She throws a stake on the floor and Ripper storms to it. Petunia looks disturbed to the dirty floor.

MAGDA
You! Boy, still here?

Harry looks up from his plate.

HARRY
Yes.

MAGDA
Do not say ”yes” in this rude tone! Damn nice from my Vernon and Petunia to keep you here.
(To Vernon and Petunia)
If they had put him on my door, he would be at an orphanage.

PETUNIA
Well, she was my sister.

Harry grins - everywhere it would be nicer than here.

MAGDA
Don’t grins to me like that! I see since my last visit you don’t improve! Vernon, where you’re taking the boy?

VERNON
To St. Brutus Secure Centre for Incurably Criminal Boys.
MAGDA
Well done.

She drinks from her wine.

MAGDA
Do they use the cane?

HARRY
Oh. Oh, yes.

MAGDA
Excellent. I hate this Whishy Washy that you should not beat people who actually really deserves it.

She drinks again from her wine, but then her glass EXPLODES! Short shot from Harry’s angry face.

PETUNIA
Oh Magda!

VERNON
Are you alright?

Both are very upset, but her son stares at the black TV screen.

VERNON
(To Harry)
Maybe its better you go up.

As Harry wants to stand up...

MAGDA
No, no. I’m fine. You stay! Hey! Plate!

Harry takes the shards and put it in the trash. Then he goes to the cupboard and takes a new plate. He grins, but as he turns Vernon stands in front of him.

HARRY
(Surprised)
Man!

VERNON
(Whisper)
I warn you! I told you not to do anything!

HARRY
I didn’t do that!

VERNON
Shh! If something happens...

HARRY
Then what? Two weeks cupboard? Great.

Harry passes him and put the plate to Magda. She looks at him.

MAGDA
Don’t worry.

VERNON
What?

MAGDA
About him. It’s not your fault he has gone to that.

HARRY
Oh, shut up.

MAGDA
Do you want to say something?

HARRY
Oh, no.

MAGDA
It’s always the parents. The father
especially. What a job his father had?

VERNON
Nothing. He was jobless.

MAGDA
(Drunk)
And a drinker!

HARRY
SHUT UP!

Magda ignores him.

MAGDA
(Still drunk)
No, not the father. It’s always the mother. It’s the same with dogs. If the mother is wrong you have...

HARRY
DAMN, SHUT UP! SHUT UP! My father wasn’t a drinker! And my mother wasn’t wrong! It’s just YOU! You’re the god damn, wrong, drunk b i t c h !

VERNON
GO UP! NOW!


MAGDA
Boy! You’d better...

She raises one finger, but suddenly –-

-- the finger SWELLS! It’s getting bigger and bigger.




Last edited by KevinWeasley; February 11th, 2011 at 7:43 pm.
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